Pulattie, Josh - Language Arts Teacher / 6th revision paper

Revision to do list -6th

Ò1. 4 places where you have added detail by adding words p. 298

Ò2. 2 places where you have added a simile p.299

Ò3. 2 places where you have added a metaphor p.299

Ò4. 1 place where you have added personification p.299

Ò5. 3 places where you have replaced words p.302

Ò6. 3 places where you have deleted words p.303

Ò7. 3 places where you have added prepositional phrases

Ò8. 2 places where you have edited grammar (spelling, punctuation, capitilization)

Here's the prompt:
Write a 4-6 page DOUBLE SPACED draft over the following- Write a story about a very bad day of your life

Or
Write a story about a man named Lord Richard II